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Tuesday, December 1, 2020

the car was stuck on a tree

The car stuck on a tree. it was a nice day. in the sun. I wake up in the sun. I saw two cars. the two cars was gonna crash. the order car was flung buy the car. it was crazy. everyone saw it. the car was stuck on a tree he couldn't get out of the tree. he was say. by the helicopter.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 2, 2020 at 2:32 PM

    Hi Lawrence I like your car what type of car is stuck on the tree it reminded me about a movie that I wathed.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 8, 2020 at 2:46 PM

    Hi Lauren I like how you describe the car in the tree and how it happened. but make sure to double check how did your work cos I saw some mistakes like the order car.

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