Hi Lawrence I really like your writing because it was nice and long. Next time you should add more writing because I liked it. It reminds me of my little sister writing. Hope you have a great day.
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hi Lawrence I like your peace of writing.
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you could do it a bit Nita
i like your poem. what kind of poem is it?
ReplyDeleteHi Lawrence I like your righting but you could re read because I saw a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes
ReplyDeleteHi Lawrence I really like your writing because it was nice and long.
ReplyDeleteNext time you should add more writing because I liked it.
It reminds me of my little sister writing.
Hope you have a great day.