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Friday, October 23, 2020


 

4 comments:

  1. hi Lawrence I like your peace of writing.
    maybe next time you could do it a bit Nita

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  2. i like your poem. what kind of poem is it?

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  3. Hi Lawrence I like your righting but you could re read because I saw a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes

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  4. Hi Lawrence I really like your writing because it was nice and long.
    Next time you should add more writing because I liked it.
    It reminds me of my little sister writing.
    Hope you have a great day.

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