Friday, July 24, 2020
wan i was going to mum a magic carpit i want to sit on it i slowe want up my dog or cat day fre out i col my mum i tod my mum im floting and my mum did bliv me and i want to go down and i want down want to go crocheting i was scared i close my eys it was gon dat was wed i sed it was a track.
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Hi Lawrence. Great effort with your writing. Perhaps before you post next time, you could check for full stops and capital letters. Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteHi Lawrence try a little bit harder next time
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